This looks more like an incomplete project than a flash. It has alot of potential to be a fun game later on but right now you've got a lot of kinks to work out, starting with the graphics. Right now you can't even tell which is the front of your "car." You should also add more levels before submitting it and make sure that you actually have to get to the end to win the level. The first time i played it, I went backwards and won in two seconds. Better luck next time dude.
I personally find your animation style very enjoyable and unique. I do have questions as to why do a few of the themes and terms remind me of Stephen King's "Dark Tower" series. For example the term "Outer World" used in last episode, Gunswordsman which is similar to Gunslinger and now Cort, which was also a name used in the King's novel.
I'm not sure about the "outer world" being a term from the Dark Tower series, but Khef and Cort certainly are intentional homages to the books. However, my version of "khef" isn't remotely similar to DT's khef and Cort, well yeah, he's not the same either. :P I was just in love with those books at the time and thought I'd throw a few references to em in the flash.
I've been intrigued by the story since the first episode, and your artwork is simply amazing. This story was nicely woven to keep things suspenseful but I feel that keeping the decapitated head in the movie icon kind of ruins it, although it may still serve as a great attention grabber. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward for more stuff.
That was awesome (wish it was a bit longer though :()!!! Other than the fact that he destroys everything, I'd love to have an employee like that! HOLY JUMPING JESUS!!! MAKE MORE!!!!
Really nice intro to set the mood and all, and great sound FX. Maybe it's cuz i'm watching it alone in the dark, but i can safely say that was the scariest flash i've seen on newgrounds yet. The scenery reminded me a bit of works by Adam Philips (the guy who did Bitey). Anyhow, excellent job overall.
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Rated 1 / 5 stars February 8, 2009
Nice try but keep at it.
This looks more like an incomplete project than a flash. It has alot of potential to be a fun game later on but right now you've got a lot of kinks to work out, starting with the graphics. Right now you can't even tell which is the front of your "car." You should also add more levels before submitting it and make sure that you actually have to get to the end to win the level. The first time i played it, I went backwards and won in two seconds. Better luck next time dude.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 29, 2007
Sick!! (In more than one way! lol)
That was pretty awesome buh you probably coulda replaced the giant dick guy with some sort of monster or something.
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 23, 2007
This is a nice series.
I personally find your animation style very enjoyable and unique. I do have questions as to why do a few of the themes and terms remind me of Stephen King's "Dark Tower" series. For example the term "Outer World" used in last episode, Gunswordsman which is similar to Gunslinger and now Cort, which was also a name used in the King's novel.
I'm not sure about the "outer world" being a term from the Dark Tower series, but Khef and Cort certainly are intentional homages to the books. However, my version of "khef" isn't remotely similar to DT's khef and Cort, well yeah, he's not the same either. :P I was just in love with those books at the time and thought I'd throw a few references to em in the flash.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 22, 2007
AHHH MY EYES!!!
That was awesome buh wayyy too flashy. My eyes kill right now hahah!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 21, 2007
Got too dull.
It was OK...except for the fact that the sandbag never really fights back...
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 21, 2007
Creepy...but in an awesome kind of way.
I've been intrigued by the story since the first episode, and your artwork is simply amazing. This story was nicely woven to keep things suspenseful but I feel that keeping the decapitated head in the movie icon kind of ruins it, although it may still serve as a great attention grabber. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward for more stuff.
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 13, 2007
A Masterpiece.
That was beautiful, although I must say that the ending was a bit abrupt. Great series and good work.
Rated 5 / 5 stars July 6, 2007
MAKE MORE!!
That was awesome (wish it was a bit longer though :()!!! Other than the fact that he destroys everything, I'd love to have an employee like that! HOLY JUMPING JESUS!!! MAKE MORE!!!!
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 11, 2007
Very nice work.
Really nice intro to set the mood and all, and great sound FX. Maybe it's cuz i'm watching it alone in the dark, but i can safely say that was the scariest flash i've seen on newgrounds yet. The scenery reminded me a bit of works by Adam Philips (the guy who did Bitey). Anyhow, excellent job overall.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 20, 2006
Excellent Work.
I found that to be very poetic, excellent job and keep up the good work. Reminds me a bit of the "Berserk" anime.